Comments on: Tear Drop on the Fire

By: Steve

Steve — Wed, 19 Jul 2006 03:51:48 +0000

I quite enjoyed the read. It delves into some of my own memories Nicely done, Lady.

By: Joe

Joe — Sun, 16 Jul 2006 19:07:07 +0000

I don't understand the prologue. I mean, nobody ever argues that the sun won't rise.

By: Larry

Larry — Sun, 16 Jul 2006 14:42:30 +0000

great job girl keep up the good work

By: katya

katya — Sun, 16 Jul 2006 05:11:47 +0000

awesome, britagne. your words were put together so neatly and beautifully! it helps when youre passionate about your work, no?

By: Chris

Chris — Sat, 15 Jul 2006 23:05:15 +0000

beautifully done.

By: jake clark

jake clark — Sat, 15 Jul 2006 22:59:51 +0000

hey hey gurl good luck ur the best congrats too ya i am so happy just dont forget about us all

By: James

James — Sun, 09 Jul 2006 07:14:24 +0000

I Love you Bitch!

By: brittany terbush

brittany terbush — Sun, 09 Jul 2006 04:40:48 +0000

i like how expressive your writing is, and i think your vocabulary is just delicious… props!

By: M. Charles

M. Charles — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 19:06:04 +0000

I wish I could be as articulate and talented.

By: Dante

Dante — Sat, 08 Jul 2006 19:02:22 +0000

Wow… very intense. Thank you for that. :crying:

By: aaliyah

aaliyah — Mon, 03 Jul 2006 21:56:15 +0000

that waz buttyful :crying:

By: Whitney

Whitney — Mon, 03 Jul 2006 20:43:51 +0000

Damn

By: Britagne

Britagne — Mon, 03 Jul 2006 20:39:40 +0000

:tongue:Okay people! Thank you SO much for reading! I am so happy- BUT- I must answer a very important question about the story- THAT IS THE CURE VERSION OF "LOVE SONG"!

By: Ken Beverly

Ken Beverly — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 05:56:00 +0000

Fantastic!Very eloquently written and well versed.A triumph in literature.The addition of song verse blends well into the piece.Bravo! Feel free to e-mail me. Thanks!

By: Derek

Derek — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 03:47:29 +0000

:tongue:Depechmode and The Cure huh, very interesting some of my faves too. Your such a little badass. Love ya baby, talk to ya soon, I'll call you this week.

By: kevin

kevin — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 03:09:42 +0000

u have lot to be said you know how to express ur self in full with out any one negutive responce it is great to see some out their say what they mean love the story feel free to email me any time

By: Amber

Amber — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 02:40:05 +0000

you are very very talented and i love you work because it makes you wanna keep reading and it gives me the crazy feelings about wondering twhats gonna happen next!! i love it… ~Amber

By: paul

paul — Sun, 02 Jul 2006 02:34:31 +0000

you are very talented,your story was more than great i loved it

By: DragonFire

DragonFire — Sat, 01 Jul 2006 13:30:12 +0000

That was a very interesting story. i even cried at some parts

By: ANTHONY L. FRYE

ANTHONY L. FRYE — Sat, 01 Jul 2006 11:14:10 +0000

GREAT SHORT STORY—I WAS THERE–IN THE MIDST OF EVERY LINE—YOUR WORDS BECAME MINE—YOUR ACTIONS AND FEELINGS BECAME MINE–LOVED IT